Friday, September 27, 2013

Blog #4 Data Set Analysis


Group #1: Sarina Rizzo, Danielle Barakat, Brianne Mintz
Research Question for analysis:
Q: 1. What did the group do? What does this behavior show about the class culture?
We define class culture as “a group of students who have similar interests, majors, and goals.”
Professor’s Role:-How much is noted about the Professor’s role?
-In “Things I remember later” note taker #5  stated that Dr. Chandler pointed out his actions during the mingling. #10 stated that Dr. Chandler was the one who initiated the conversation
#9 mentions Dr. Chandler asking them to move frequently.  #5 in Observations about what happened: People stayed in groups of 2 or 3 until the professor told us to move around
* The evidence shows that Dr. Chandler was the main person who initiated the conversations amongst the members of the community. Her role is key in not only the function and actions of the group, but she influences the culture because without her actions, none of the data would be possible.
Environments:
-They all expressed a similar environment; each person played a role. Everyone had something to say about the person they spoke to.
-   What do the topics say about the group as a whole? (No one discussed marriage, children, buying a house, etc.).- The topics were almost “safety net” topics due to forced interaction due to the environment. For example, because they were students, they chose to discuss majors and feelings about classes, jobs, et cetera. The culture is shaped by their environment.
-       The environment influenced the communication topics.
* The evidence shows that the environment affected the topics discussed. Instead of discussing outside lives and families, the classmates discussed their life in school for the majority of the time.
Conversations:
-The class discussed different majors, interests and jobs: Note-takes #2, 4, 5, 6, 7, and 8 all mentioned being asked or asking about majors in the jottings.
-About 70% of students mentioned where they are from in either jottings, headnotes, or observations.
-What are the evidence of student relationships?- In Things I Remembered Later, #8 mentioned discussing tattoos with another classmate.  
-  #5 in Observations about what happened: Certain people tended to dominate conversations.
*Relating the the environment, the conversation topics were limited due to the environment. There were similarities in environment and topics, which also showed both the confidence and shyness that the members felt when trying to communicate. The topics came from basic ideas that were assumed to be common by everyone.
Emotions:
-We learn from each other.
-Evidence shows that observer #5 in Observations about what happened: noted that he/she felt that everyone was nervous/apprehensive.
* The evidence shows that while everyone was nervous, they eventually opened up and shared a little bit about what they were studying, their opinions, et cetera.
Observers:
- As a group, the data shows that there was a lot of conversation going on and the group was very active.
-Are they a discourse community? - Yes, because of common language (how they talk about majors, observations) shows that the commonality is that they are uncomfortable. They are a discourse community because they share a common goal. #9 in Things I Remember Later discusses their environment and notes on their classmate’s moods. #10 also mentions the room and how they “moved around twice.”
-What did the group do?- The group became observers: We can break the observers up into three groups: close in observers, far out observers, and those who did both.
- Note taker 10 was very general. Wrote the simplest observation as possible, while note takes #7 and #1 were specific and included many details from their observations.
-commonalities within the group:
-Jottings, Things I Remembered Later  seem to be where everyone was making “in depth” observations.
* The observers were the members of the group, but also the people looking in on it. The different types of observers show different roles in the group which in turn makes this community a discourse community. All the language is based off the environment and is similar, and that is a result of the environment that held the discussion.

Monday, September 23, 2013

Blog #3 Practice Field Notes

Field Notes: (In class practice)

Jottings:
- girls moved first
- small groups
- larger group emerged
- males stayed together
- pairs
-Trish
-Samantha

Headnotes:
- females were the ones who moved first
- the first row to the left stayed seated
- small groups broke out
- there were a few people who stood alone watching- awkwardly
- professor circulated the room, definitely added pressure to the students
- front row finally moved and 2 people were in a cluster, then changed places with each other
- many people did not move a lot the sort of shuffled to the left and right to find people to talk to
- the 2 males in the room tended to stay together
- there was one point where there was a larger amount of people in one area of the room
- conversations seemed to be about what people's majors were (all directed towards the one thing we all have in common)
- I got a complement on my scarf
- just reading people's body language and facial expressions you could tell people were uncomfortable
-  I had no idea what people were wearing,  I think Samantha was wearing a sweatshirt
- I spoke with Samantha and Trish, Trish and I spoke about my junior field.
- the mingling took place in the center isle of the classroom
- I stood primarily in the back of the room where the hooks on the wall were.
- There was one point where I thought Trish was going to hit her head on the hooks
- Samantha said she felt like she was speed dating
- People laughed when they felt awkward
- the conversations became more comfortable when people began talking to each other
- it was quiet at first, but the noise level increased as people got more comfortable

Things I remembered later:
- I didn't remember much after leaving the classroom. The only thing I could say I did not remember was if the professor made any kind of communication with the people in the room. I know that she was circulating around the room and listening, but I don't remember noticing if she made any conversation with anyone in the room.

Observations:
I observed that the girls were the people who engaged in the mingling first. There is a dominant number of females in the classroom so the possible reason for why the males were not too active was because they were out numbered or felt uncomfortable. Reading people's body language was definitely helpful in learning about how people felt during this. Since it was a forced interaction many people smiled and laughed initially, in order to ease the awkward feeling that probably 90% of people were experiencing. I think it is safe to say that people find comfort in finding the common things to talk about out. The number one topic I heard was talking about majors, and the second was talking about how uncomfortable they felt. Now even though these topics were not the most interesting, they led to easy conversations and from there the awkward feeling decreased and people loosened up a little.

Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Blog #2 Shaggy Dog Stories Analysis


Classwork/Group work


The members of my analysis group:

Tanaera Green, Danielle BaraKat, and Carolina Vasquez
Shaggy Dog Story #2
·         has French words
·         gives a setting
·         less formal language
·         punch line is meant to be read literally
·         use common language in the joke
·         the reader has to know the culture of NYC and how strange things happen
·         bizarre character/theme – talking murderous panda
·         joke inside a joke
·         there was a lot of emotion in a short span of time (maitre d' was horrified)
·         the punch line is created in the dialogue between the two identified characters
·         homonyms are used in the punch line:
·         weird/curiosity about the specificity of the dictionary used to look up the meaning of "Giant Panda"- there were not many other specific elements of the story, so why was the source of the punch line so specific?

Shaggy dog story #3
·         informal language used
·         setting and attitude of characters are known
·         rule of 3's: seen in the repeated question and answer from the string and the bartenders
·         overly personified the string
·         the punch line can mean more than one thing
" Nope, I'm a frayed knot." -- "Nope, I'm afraid not."
·         has a lot of emotions in the words (like the panda)
·         the punch line broke the rule of 3’s- you expect the string to get the same response, and the humor is seen when the punchline is delivered unexpectedly.

Shaggy dog story #4
·         you have to know the cultural aspect of TGIF- common phrase
·         shorter than other jokes
·         you’re supposed to know who/about  Robert Crusoe (is a book)
·         it’s a joke for people who may read a lot
·          the joke comes from the dialogue in the characters
·         the words in joke are rearranged but you can still make the connection
·         involves religion
·         somewhat literal punch line
·         not modern setting or theme – who lives in a tent/ has server or helper?

Shaggy Dog story #5
·         informal language is used
·         no character is identified
·         setting and time is identifies
·         background about lawyer, his wealth, his assets
·         seems like a fairytale story when the bears “appear”
·         lawyer seems selfish and is labeled- “stereotype”
·         fictional aspects -swallowing the male whole
·         lawyers car shows wealth (again, contributing to the idea or "stereotype" that all lawyers are wealthy)
·         Lawyer immediately thought of lawsuit –again selfishness
·         the sheriff is doubtful of the lawyer-stereotype of Two sneaky lawyers can be
·         Punch line is a pun to legal terms if “the check in in the mail”


Features that all stories had in common:
- These all used informal language
- There was a setting, or a time or place identified.
- The punch lines were all literal, or actual things that would require background cultural knowledge to know.
- These all had dialogue between characters in them
- The characters were vague and not really identified too much; there were no names
- all three were fictional and created stories and had elements in them that would never happen in real life.



Saturday, September 7, 2013

Blog #1 What kind of writing studies research are you interested in working on?

      I am interested in researching a few different aspects of a classroom. I would like to research how to co-teachers work in a pre-school setting. I would want to look at the way they teach together, plan accordingly, and handle problems while supporting or doubting the other one's choices, and communicate. As far as planning together, if I chose this area, I would want to look at how the plans complement each teacher and the way that they go about setting and executing goals for the students.
      Another idea that I would want to possibly look at is the pattern of teacher response to both positive and negative behaviors exerted by the students in a pre-k classroom. The final option that I thought of was looking at a director of a childcare center and observing the different ways that they communicate with parents, staff and the children.